Broken Wings

Chapter One/ Part two finally finished! I was surprised when I found myself waking up to a gentle, rocking feeling. I was leaning on the stallion’s neck, my arms draped ...

Okay, I lied. This is Chapter One/ Part One. I fixed it up a bit and made it longer. Don't worry, I don't think Part two will be as long. ...

Yes, dragons will come soon. And thank you for your comments...Eleinasari, I don't see how that sentence is unclear, but I'll try to change it. I'm also sorry for my ...

xD She was just talking to the tree because it listened and no one else wanted to. And yes, the dance thing is something from my own experience. I don't ...

My cousin would love this story, I think. I need to get her on this site. Well, I really can't find any flaws. That's a first. May I ask why? ...

Awww. :( This had the potential to be utterly corny, but it wasn't. I liked how the memories were described both as they actually were, and with the layers that ...

That's the exact same thing my friend said! Thank you =^-^=

Haha, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! --Wings

Chapter One [part one]— The shadows flickered around me, and the cold seemed to go right through my clothes. I wrapped the old blanket tighter around me (though it made ...

Generally, I agree with the two above comment, lol J Quote: I had never been good about standing in front of a crowd, and even though there were only seven ...

...I'm not really twelve. I mess around with my age when I have nothing better to do, and at the time I must've felt like being twelve. I don't like ...

Well, getting back to the poem... It does sound a bit like the attention to rhythm is overpowering the language itself. With that attention to rhythm, it's a little disappointing ...

It wasn't rally supposed to be focused on anything specific. Basically the fact that ((forgive this emo-ness, it has nothing to do with my feelings, it's just there)) life is ...

Thank you xD; Yes, it is a tad bit dark, isn't it? I love your signature by the way >.> It made me laugh for a good two minutes or ...

it that bad? Dx